11 June 2025

Birthday


 A BIRTHDAY PROMPT

source

I've got a birthday coming up . . . do you, too?        Maybe you are looking forward to a milestone birthday for you or someone else, or maybe you've celebrated one in the past that would make a poem now.  Was it a lonely day or a lovely one?  
          Or maybe it's the idea of a birthday that you're thinking of: What is a birthday's significance to you?  what "should" a person do on that special day--or on that ordinary day?  What shouldn't you do?  What would you truly like for a present?

This is a birthday prompt to play with as you will.  
A few examples are below.

💖💖💖

 

How did I get so old,
I wonder,
contemplating
my 67th birthday.
Dyslexia smiles:
I’m 76 in fact.

There are places
where at 60 they start
counting backwards;
in Japan
they start again
from one.

But the numbers
hardly matter.
It’s the physics
of acceleration I mind,
the way time speeds up
as if it hasn’t guessed

the destination—
where look!
I see my mother
and father bearing a cake,
waiting for me
at the starting line.

Early Morning, My Birthday
by Mary Oliver

The snails on the pink sleds of their bodies are moving
among the morning glories.
The spider is asleep among the red thumbs
of the raspberries.
What shall I do, what shall I do?

The rain is slow
The little birds are alive in it.
Even the beetles.
The green leaves lap it up.
What shall I do, what shall I do?

The wasp sits on the porch in her paper castle.
The blue heron floats out of the clouds.
The fish leaps, all rainbow and mouth, from the dark water.

This morning the water lilies are no less lovely, I think,
than the lilies of Monet.
And I do not want anymore to be useful, to be docile, to lead
children out of the fields into the text
of civility, to teach them that they are (they are not) better 
than the grass.

💚💚💚

This song is Stevie Wonder's plea for a national holiday on MLK, Jr's Birthday.  (We've been celebrating it for years.)

💖💖💖

Please link one poem that is your response to this prompt.  
After you link your poem, please visit others,
and
Don't forget to include this link in your post.

10 comments:

  1. Happy birthday month, Susan! I like the idea of, after 60, one starts counting backward or (as in Japan) start again with 1! I hope you celebrate your day/month in a special way!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thank you Susan so much for this beautiful prompt. It did trigger some fond memories. I love the poems you've shared too.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thanks for the prompt, Susan, and the great poems. I definitely am feeling how time speeds up at my age - slow days, yet weeks streak past. I hope you have a most wonderful birthday!

    ReplyDelete
  4. And happy happy birthday to you Susan and everyone having birthdays this June.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Happy birthday Susan - I had a June birthday too! Jae

    ReplyDelete
  6. A very happy birthday to you, Susan! I hope you're having a wonderful day.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Happy Birthday, Susan! Perfect timing for this prompt for a loved one's bday for me~

    ReplyDelete
  8. Happy Birthday to EVERYONE! Mine was last week :-) Thanks for the prompt, my entry is in.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Thank you for all the birthday wishes and for your fine poems! It's been a busy week, and here we are at "No Kings Day" and Flag Day, etc. Be safe, and remember it's also a good day for poetry!

    ReplyDelete