01 November 2023

Moving



Moving HOUSE and HOME



I'm selling my house and moving into an apartment in a retirement community. This prompt is to encourage me/us to write about the transition from steward of place to occupant of space--or vice versa.  Of course, it's not as simple or as separate as that. Is moving ever simple?

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Delve into your own experience, or choose one of the following poems to inspire you, and create a moving house-and-home moving poem. 

  • What life-altering move(s) have you made?
  • What did/will you bring from old home to new?  
  • What would be your ultimate fantasy move?
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    I've sampled each of the following poems.  Please follow the links to read the entire poem:


    Verses upon the Burning of our House, July 10th, 1666

    Here Follows Some Verses Upon the Burning
    of Our house, July 10th. 1666. Copied Out of
    a Loose Paper.

    In silent night when rest I took,
    For sorrow near I did not look,
    I wakened was with thund’ring noise
    And piteous shrieks of dreadful voice.
    That fearful sound of “fire” and “fire,”
    Let no man know is my Desire.
    . . . . 

    It takes a heap o’ livin’ in a house t’ make it home,
    A heap o’ sun an’ shadder, an’ ye sometimes have t’ roam
    Afore ye really ’preciate the things ye lef’ behind,
    An’ hunger fer ’em somehow, with ’em allus on yer mind.
    . . . . 

    ON LOSING A HOUSE

    “On Losing a House,” by Mary Oliver, appeared in the Winter 2001 issue of MQR.

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    2. 

    Where will we go
    with our table and chairs,
    our bed,
    our nine thousand books,
    our TV, PC, VCR,
    our cat
    who is sixteen years old?
    Where will we put down
    our dishes and our blue carpets,
    where will we put up
    our rose-colored,
    rice-paper
    shades?

    . . . . 

    Happy writing!  Link your poem for this prompt, and then visit and comment on others' poems.  We will visit you, too.  Have a good day!

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