Sadness
Write a poem that explores sadness not necessarily as a single feeling, but as something you might experience or live with,.
It can be about sadnesss in general or about a specific thing that causes sadness.
A few ideas:
1. Where are you when you experience sadness? Is it a room, a season, a memory, a body?
What does sadness sound like there—silence, repetition, something distant?
Let the poem express the small details.
2. Consider what is unsaid. about sadness. Is sadness sharp or dull or pounding?
You might write about:
- a quiet moment after something has ended
- a conversation that never happened
- something once joyful that no longer is
Try to write so the reader will feel the sadness. Allow the poem not to have an easy resolution. Let it end in a way that feels true rather than resolved. In your poem, you don'thave to make the sadness go away. Feel free to let the sadness just hang there. Sometimes sadness is that way.
I could look for poems on sadness as examples, but I decided to let you discover your own if you wish to do a google search. I don't know about you, but often example poems do not help me write. Think SADNESS, and go from there.
After you write your poem, link it using Mr. Linky below. Then please visit the poems of others who post. The prompt will close Sunday at 8 p.m. Eastern Time.
I look forward to reading what you come up with.

Good morning, Friends! A lot of poems and popular songs are written about sadness. It is something that we all deal with in our lives. Within the past several months, I went to see the movie "Song Sung Blue" (which is now available on streaming platforms) which was based on a few years in the life of a Neil Diamond 'knockoff' band. "Song Sung Blue" was one of Neil's songs, if anyone is not familiar with his music. The movie, as the title song, had quite a bit of sadness in it, but also the rising about the sadness. It was a good movie, if you haven't seen it. I look forward to reading your 'sad' poems this week! And be sure to visit other poets who write!
ReplyDeleterising "above" the sadness
DeleteA universal topic, Mary, in these times when there is so much to be sad about, and to try to rise bbove. Not always easy. I will check out that movie. I used to love Neil Diamond's music back in the day.
ReplyDeleteBlogger isn't taking my comments today. Here's one for your poem:
Delete"they are fortunate enough
to not understand the news. They understand
my sadness, though, so they move close to me,"
The animals who decide to adopt us feel our pain--and our hope. I LOVE this poem. It is my new favorite of yours.
It took it!
DeleteThanks, Susan, am happy you like it.
DeleteSherry, I KNOW you would like the movie. The music is wonderful!
DeleteA good topic, Mary and a very relevant one.
ReplyDeleteI aam glad you liked the topic, Sumana, and found it relevant! It is a feeling none of us can escape at one time or another.
DeleteHi Sumana - I hope you get this - have tried to comment on your blog but it won't seem to publish - I loved your clarity of thought and reference to the painting and also that the void is filled with words - Jae
DeleteThank you Mary for a thoughtful prompt - Jae
ReplyDeleteSo good to see you, Jae.
DeleteDear Rall, Your site wouldn't publish my comment! Your poem speaks my truth as well. The unsettledness of it all! Thank you.
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