~ eternal ~
&
~ Unchanging ~
“Victory is temporary, but joy is eternal. Grateful for all of the joyful moments, big and small.” ―
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| source (Eternity is often symbolized by the endless snake, swallowing its own tail, the ouroboros.) |
When something is eternal it has no beginning and no end. Let's use the idea of "unchanging" as well. We might know the beginning of something, but then experience it as lasting, rather than changing over time.
For this prompt, write about things or ideas that remain the same despite life's events. We live in a world where even positive values seem to be temporary and time specific. But what is unchanging, what can we count on, or what do we hope is timeless or everlasting?
By Unknown, Translated By Samson Allal
From the tomb stela of King Wahankh Intef II, pharaoh of the Eleventh Dynasty of Egypt, 2108–2059 BCE
Accept me, Ra, before you go,
before I go,
I pray ...
Do polychromatic dawn threads
coat you,
like the tiny coruscating disks
sewn into a sequin dress?
Bring me to the breast of the night,
let me suckle stars,
cuddle obsidian cosmos ancestors ...
They honor you, Ra,
like I do.
We sing your praises when you rise,
we weep
whenever you duck under the earth.
Embrace me, like a mother, O eternal night!
Fold me,
like a black origami flamingo,
forever protected
by dark paper, dark praise ...
How Do I Love Thee? (Sonnet 43)
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love thee to the level of every day’s
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.
ETERNITY
by Robert Herrick
O years! and age! farewell:
Behold I go,
Where I do know
Infinity to dwell.And these mine eyes shall see
All times, how they
Are lost i’ th’ sea
Of vast eternity: –Where never moon shall sway
The stars; but she,
And night, shall be
Drown’d in one endless day.
∞
(I'm tempted to add 20 more poems calling plastic and trash, writing, love, hope, justice, wilderness, etc., eternal . . . but what is YOUR experience?)
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Welcome poets! Today we're focusing on the eternal, already with some amazing poems. Come and join us!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the prompt, Susan. A good one. I especially love the poem A Hymn to Ra. There are indeed infinite ways to look at the eternal.
ReplyDeleteI love the uplifting feeling of seeing the Big Picture, when we so often get mired in the small havoc we wreak down below. Smiles. An interesting prompt indeed. Thanks, Susan.
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