As this is Poetry month, it seems fitting to contemplate the art of poetry itself. Why do we write? What drives us to pick up our pens, tap our keys, keep these lines of words moving across the page or screen?
Sometimes I like to write a poem that starts with "Poetry Is....." and then continues on, as it is an easy segue to any number of random observances.
I am remembering Hannah E. Bowles' (formerly Gosselin) wonderful Boomerang Metaphor form, that she created back in the days of Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads. It takes this premise farther in starting out with three lines, each stating a complete thought. The poet then expands each line into a separate stanza. The wrap-up final stanza repeats the first three lines. Like a boomerang!
That is more challenging, but it is a form I am very fond of and haven't tried for a while. If interested, you can find Hannah's more detailed explanation of the form at Real Toads, at this link.
Hannah kindly allowed me to use her first Boomerang Metaphor poem as an example.
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This Poem is a Hoe, the Wheel and a Sphere
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This poem is a three-year-old boy using a hoe.
This poem is a red tricycle.
This poem is an iridescent glass-globe.
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This poem is small and strong,
it wishes to work and play all the day long.
This poem likes to get grubby and grounded,
this poem is a little guy with giant dreams.
This poem is a three-year-old boy using a hoe.
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This poem is metallic - related to the bicycle
it desires the wind of motion on its wheels;
this poem enjoys the journey forward into the unknown.
This poem is always happy to come back home,
this poem is a red tricycle.
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This poem is fragile and forever beautiful,
it’s whole and in an instant shattered.
This poem celebrates and embraces slivers of light,
this poem is a prism – rays gathered flight;
this poem is an iridescent glass globe.
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This poem is a small blue-eyed boy with a garden hoe.
This poem is a colorful streamer-adorned tricycle.
This poem is the rainbow in the iridescent glass-globe.
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Copyright © Hannah Gosselin and Metaphors and Smiles, 2011-14
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Here is an example of the Poetry Is........form:
I BELIEVE
Poetry, I tell my students,is idiosyncratic. Poetry
is where we are ourselves
(though Sterling Brown said
“Every ‘I’ is a dramatic ‘I’”),
digging in the clam flats
for the shell that snaps,
emptying the proverbial pocketbook.
Poetry is what you find
in the dirt in the corner,
overhear on the bus, God
in the details, the only way
to get from here to there.
Poetry (and now my voice is rising)
is not all love, love, love,
and I’m sorry the dog died.
Poetry (here I hear myself loudest)
is the human voice,
and are we not of interest to each other?
-by Elizabeth Alexander
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So, our possible prompts are:
*Poetry Is.......
*The Boomerang Metaphor form, for those who enjoy a challenge, or
*A poem about poetry, as we celebrate its meaning in our lives
I am so looking forward to reading the results. Poetry is......wonderful! Bravo to those who are writing a poem a day!
Good morning, poets! Applause to those of you who are doing the poem a day. We are approaching the end of the month, keep those pistons firing. Smiles. Today's prompt offers one challenging and one easier option. I will be happy with whatever pours forth from your pen.
ReplyDeleteHappy St George's Day and the anniversary of Shakespeare's death - his birth date is supposed to be today as well, but it's debatable. I've been so busy writing poems for NaPoWriMo and other prompts, I ran out of steam, so I've linked up a poem from just over two years ago that I believe fits the bill. I look forward to reading your poems.
ReplyDeleteThanks for letting us know about St George's Day and the anniversary of Shakespeare's death. Wow. Good for you doing NaPoWriMo. I lack the energy this year, but I used to love it.
DeletePoetry is... hard to write well! ;-)
ReplyDeleteThis is Shay. I guess I am Anony Mouse now.
DeleteLovely to see you, Shay. I am looking forward to what you bring forth from your attic full of amazements.
DeleteEnjoyed this prompt. Thanks Sherry.
ReplyDeleteI love your memory poem, Rall. Lovely.
DeleteHello!! This is Hannah Bowles! There was a problem with cookies, (I don't know how cookies could ever be a problem 😂), so I'm also anon y mouse as well...
ReplyDeleteIt is so nice to see familiar names and to read your post Sherry! I'm so honored and humbled that you brought back the Boomerang!
I'm looking forward to catching up with posts and writing another one soon!
Thank you!
Hannah, I am so thrilled you stopped by. Folks will be so glad to see you. I miss the Real Toads and Poets United days, those were good years. We had fun! Your Boomerang form is one of my faves, along with pantoums....was fun to look at it again.
Deletep.s. The link closes Sunday at 8 p.m. Detroit time. Smiles.
DeleteThis is great, Sherry. I'm so glad you brought Hannah's form back out for a spin! My poem is inspired by it, though not true to it. I just went where the muse lead. I hope that's OK!
ReplyDeleteIt's absolutely okay. I didnt follow it exactly either.
DeleteI composed a Poetry Is but, I put my own spin on it. I'll be back tomorrow to read its late here.
ReplyDeleteSo happy you stopped by, True.
DeleteThank you Sherry for a lovely prompt. It was a pleasure to read all the wonderful offerings this week.
DeletePoetry is: The elderly woman at the grocery store that couldn't remember where she parked.
This happened the other day and I was glad I was around to assist her. There is poetry in helping those that are lost. We only need to take the time to view our surroundings. Happy weekend my friend.
People in need of help and kindness are all around. Thanks for the reminder, True.
DeleteThank you Sherry - it is good to reflect - I will try and read/comment but if I can't I apologise- Jae
ReplyDeleteNo worries, Jae. We're just happy you stopped by.
DeleteI love boomerang poetry, although I haven't written one since Real Toads. I'm not sure I accomplished the form, but enjoyed the challenge.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you tried the form, Susie. It is nice to challenge ourselves now and then. Smiles.
DeleteFolks, Susie wrote a second poem to this prompt that is really really beautiful. Not to be missed. You can find it here: https://confessionsofalaundrygoddess.blogspot.com/2025/04/this-poem-is-clouds-bloom-and-sparkle.html
ReplyDeleteI am so thrilled with the BEAUTIFUL poems you all linked to this prompt. Thank you so much. It is a feast of beauty in here this week. Wow.
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