“Upstairs, in the cupboard, he had a box of things he had saved as a boy
and a young man. He hadn't looked into it in twenty years or more.
Nothing fancy or valuable, but things that had meant something
to him at one time. He found it, and found the key,
and carried it downstairs without opening it.”
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- Do you have treasures you've saved forever?
- Where do you keep them?
- Which ones are more precious than the rest?
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The top two shelves of my China cabinet are an altar of precious things: photographs of people and souvenirs from journeys I've taken. A silver-handled spoon made of shell makes me think of the friend who gave it to me, and the time we spent together. A wooden bowl carved by my brother holds three crumbling pieces of the Berlin wall. And so on. Would I take any of these treasures with me in an emergency? No. I've contemplated getting rid of them. I would remember whether or not the object remained. But still, I keep them. Keepsakes.
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Make a poem of your treasure chest
and/or your keepsakes.
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A few poems to inspire:
- The Cane-Bottom’d Chair BY WILLIAM MAKEPEACE THACKERAY
- Storage by Mary Oliver
- THE TREASURE DRAWER by Antoinette De Coursey Patterson
- My Treasures By Robert Louis Stevenson
- Mother's Closet BY MAXINE SCATES
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Thank you for the treasure of the prompt - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you for being here, Jae. Your poem is deeper than ever. I love the entire progression of it with its truths and revelations. These lines especially:
Delete"Time is too short to get lost
In other people’s shortcomings
Alice is my treasure"
Time is way too short to be caught up and lost, for sure!
Thank you Susan - I really enjoyed the prompt - Jae
DeleteWelcome, Poets! Looking forward to seeing where this prompt takes you!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking my poem, Mary! And for greeting people while I got my tooth's crown replaced!
DeleteThanks for another interesting prompt, Susan. You are good at finding fresh ideas.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Fireblossom. I'm happy that you are here.
DeleteA very interesting prompt, Susan. Wow, pieces of the Berlin wall are amazing. I remember how I felt when that wall came down, something I had not expected to see in my lifetime. Now, metaphorical walls are up, all over the world, higher than I ever expected to see, as well. May they fall too.
ReplyDeleteAmen to that!
DeleteA very interesting prompt Susan and also wonderful responses.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana. I love your poem!
DeleteThanks so much for the prompt Susan.
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome. What a poem you wrote! An amazing open door of that closet.
DeleteOooh just finished reading and commenting all after first writing and posting one of my own. All combined are a veritable treasure chest shimmering jewels of these of these collective gems! Thank you one and all !
ReplyDeleteI feel the same way. Such unique poems!
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