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Here are the simple facts of the March equinox:
- Day and night are of equal length.
- In 2025, the March equinox will be on Thursday, March 20.
- The March equinox may be taken to mark the beginning of astronomical spring in the Northern Hemisphere and astronomical autumn in the Southern Hemisphere. (Wiki)
beyond the facts, we note signs of the seasons, and how they resonate in our hearts. What ideas emerge?
Below are two poems about spring that I love. In the poem "Spring," look at how the bear wakes Mary Oliver's narrator to the question "How to love the world?" The bear's interaction with the world seems to Mary Oliver to be "perfect love." In Ada Limon's "Instructions on not Giving Up," the "greening of the trees" symbolizes resistance, a "continuous living" despite what the winter does. (Notice that both poems have fists in them!)
Choose something from spring--or if you're in the southern hemisphere, you might want to choose something from fall.
Make a poem that brings the season (or an idea the season evokes) alive.
Spring by Mary Oliver
Somewhere
a black bear
has just risen from sleep
and is staringdown the mountain.
All night
in the brisk and shallow restlessness
of early springI think of her,
her four black fists
flicking the gravel,
her tonguelike a red fire
touching the grass,
the cold water.
There is only one question:how to love this world.
I think of her
rising
like a black and leafy ledgeto sharpen her claws against
the silence
of the trees.
Whatever elsemy life is
with its poems
and its music
and its glass cities,it is also this dazzling darkness
coming
down the mountain,
breathing and tasting;
all day I think of her—
her white teeth,
her wordlessness,
her perfect love.
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More than the fuchsia funnels breaking out
of the crabapple tree, more than the neighbor’s
almost obscene display of cherry limbs shoving
their cotton candy-colored blossoms to the slate
sky of Spring rains, it’s the greening of the trees
that really gets to me. When all the shock of white
and taffy, the world’s baubles and trinkets, leave
the pavement strewn with the confetti of aftermath,
the leaves come. Patient, plodding, a green skin
growing over whatever winter did to us, a return
to the strange idea of continuous living despite
the mess of us, the hurt, the empty. Fine then,
I’ll take it, the tree seems to say, a new slick leaf
unfurling like a fist to an open palm, I’ll take it all.
❤❤❤
Welcome, Poets! I hope you are enjoying the change of seasons surrounding this equinox. I'm looking forward to reading your poems.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you for your beautiful poem, Jae Rose, and for blessing the days with thanks to both the sun and moon.
DeleteHi Jae, I am having trouble commenting on your poem but, I wanted to let you know I read it.
DeleteThank you for another year
More time to scribble
amen to that....
Susan, thanks for the timely topic, and the wonderful inspiration poems. "Instructions on Not Giving Up" is a rather perfect poem for right now.
ReplyDeleteYes! ". . . a return
Deleteto the strange idea of continuous living despite
the mess of us, the hurt, the empty."
Thanks Susan for the beautiful prompt. I like Spring but enjoy our mild and brief winter more. Now looking forward to reading poems. Sumana
ReplyDeleteI don't blame you. Spring means hot is coming next!
DeleteA welcome prompt, Susan, as welcome as the Spring!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dora.
DeleteFor crying out loud!! I'm not sure how I forgot to link up my poem some four days back, but I did. I must have come down with a case of spring madness.
DeleteThanks for the great prompt for this time of year and for sharing two beautiful poems. Few can invoke spring as well as Mary Oliver...love her poem "Spring."
ReplyDeleteMe too. "Spring" is so descriptive!
DeleteThanks, Susan, for a wonderful, and timely prompt. Both of those poems are so good. I went rather irreverent with mine~
ReplyDeleteI love your poem. Thank you.
DeleteThank you so much! I wrote another one because this day deserves it.
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It is so beautiful, Jennifer. Truly lovely.
DeleteHappy Spring! I will be around to read.
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