22 January 2025

What cold is (January 22)


~ Describe Cold ~

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Brrr, it's cold up here in Philadelphia, PA. Combine cold with dark, and I want to eat a lot and hibernate.  Even the furriest animal must prepare to hibernate and to survive in the cold of winter. Some bury themselves in blankets, leaves, or caves until the daylight grows warmer.  Some come more alive in the cold.  And so I wonder: 
What do you do to get by in the coldest months of the year?  Do you take part in winter activities?  And how can we prepare for being "left out in the cold" or being "treated coldly"?  What does having a tall glass of iced tea or an ice cream cone feel like on a hot hot day?  
Our prompt: describe cold in a poem, any kind of cold 

A few thoughts:

I always like summer
best
you can eat fresh corn
from daddy's garden
and okra
and greens
and cabbage
and lots of
barbecue
and buttermilk
and homemade ice-cream
at the church picnic

and listen to
gospel music
outside
at the church
homecoming
and you go to the mountains with
your grandmother
and go barefooted
and be warm
all the time
not only when you go to bed
and sleep

COLD POEM 

by Mary Oliver

Cold now.
Close to the edge. Almost
unbearable. Clouds
bunch up and boil down
from the north of the white bear.
This tree-splitting morning
I dream of his fat tracks,
the lifesaving suet.

I think of summer with its luminous fruit,
blossoms rounding to berries, leaves,
handsful of grain.

Maybe what cold is, is the time
we measure the love we have always had, secretly
for our own bones, the hard knife-edged love
for the warm river of the I, beyond all else; maybe

that is what it means, the beauty
of the blue shark cruising toward the tumbling seals.

In the season of snow,
in the immeasurable cold,
we grow cruel but honest; we keep
ourselves alive,
if we can, taking one after another
the necessary bodies of others, the many
crushed red flowers.


From American Primitive
Little, Brown, 1983
               
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8 comments:

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    1. Thank you for another sparkling poem. This gem was totally new to me: "Cold is cleaning your teeth / And letting your brain sparkle and zing."

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  2. A timely prompt. Thanks, Susan. I had not encountered the Mary Oliver poem and enjoyed it so much.

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    1. It's an unusual poem for her, I think. Cold is so much!

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  3. Welcome poets! I hope you are warm--but not too warm. Cold has much of the USA (east of the Rockies) in its grip. And then there is heat and fire. Whether you deal with the weather or another type of cold, I'm looking forward to reading your poems!

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  4. Definitely a timely prompt for us. We have this week had two below zero days with wind. Ugh. As for your question what do I want to do on cold days. First of all, on below zero days like we had early week, I feel stir crazy not being able to go OUT somewhere. I watch more series on TV, read more, play more online games. Thanks for Mary Oliver's poem as well. So beautiful!

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  5. Thank you Susan for the lovely prompt. In West Bengal the Himalayan region experiences snowfall; no snow where I live and not even much cold. Sigh. I love the Mary Oliver poem too.

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  6. BRRR! Here in Michigan it is so cold that it stings your face immediately and cuts right through clothing. It's as cold as it ever gets for here! Thank you for another excellent post and prompt!

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