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‘Happy early days’ should be the beginning of
a human life, very much alive to the wonders of the world around. Henry Vaughn
(1622-’95), the Welsh Metaphysical poet considers his childhood as his angel
infancy (The Retreat). Can all children afford to have this rosy view of life?
You
are to craft a poem from a child’s perspective about everything a child comes
across. See life; see this world through the eyes of a child.
Here
are three poems by A. A. Milne, Maya Angelou and Warsan Shire. When Shire
writes she opens her eyes to the harsh reality of living as an undocumented
refugee in Europe.
You
might want to write following one of them or you can have your way to set the
child in a world of its own.
Now We Are Six
By
A. A. Milne
When I was One,
I had just begun.
When I was Two,
I was nearly new.
When I was Three
I was hardly me.
When I was Four,
I was not much more.
When I was Five,
I was just alive.
But now I am Six,
I'm as clever as clever,
So I think I'll be six now for ever and ever.
Life Doesn’t
Frighten Me
By
Maya Angelou
Shadows on the wall
Noises down the hall
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Bad dogs barking loud
Big ghosts in a cloud
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Mean old Mother Goose
Lions on the loose
They don't frighten me at all
Dragons breathing flame
On my counterpane
That doesn't frighten me at all.
I go boo
Make them shoo
I make fun
Way they run
I won't cry
So they fly
I just smile
They go wild
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Tough guys fight
All alone at night
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Panthers in the park
Strangers in the dark
No, they don't frighten me at all.
That new classroom where
Boys all pull my hair
(Kissy little girls
With their hair in curls)
They don't frighten me at all.
Don't show me frogs and snakes
And listen for my scream,
If I'm afraid at all
It's only in my dreams.
I've got a magic charm
That I keep up my sleeve
I can walk the ocean floor
And never have to breathe.
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Not at all
Not at all.
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Home
By
Warsan Shire
no
one leaves home unless
home
is the mouth of a shark.
you
only run for the border
when
you see the whole city
running
as well.
your
neighbours running faster
than
you, the boy you went to school with
who
kissed you dizzy behind
the
old tin factory is
holding
a gun bigger than his body,
you
only leave home
when
home won't let you stay.
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the spirit of the community
Hello friends! Hope you all enjoy the prompt. We are looking forward to reading your poems.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the prompt, Sumana. Sadly, I saw life through the eyes of a child in a war zone. Depressing, but very much in our minds and hearts these days. I wish that every child could have a safe and sunny childhood. I am looking forward to reading the responses, as I love looking at the world through the eyes of children who are not in war zones. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteIt's reality, dear Sherry. Having seen what's going on these days I can't help quote Wordsworth's famous lines from Lines Written in Early Spring : Have I not reason to lament / What man has made of man?
DeleteThank you for the prompt .. I wrote quickly and will probably write again more thoughtfully.. need to work and be back in a bit to read and comment. Wonderful prompt!
ReplyDeletepearl here... not sure why I'm not coming up this morning.. but I am here
DeletePearl, were you the one who responded to my poem as "Anonymous"? I will assume so.
DeleteNo, I haven't responded yet today... need to work for a bit.
DeleteSumana, I took the opportunity to think back on my childhood and write from the perspective of being 'age 9.' Everything was not wonderful back then, but it was really fun to look back!
ReplyDeleteLooking back, specially if it's childhood is always fun, Mary. :)
DeleteIt's so late here now; bedtime; I'll visit you all tomorrow morning. :)
ReplyDeleteSweet dreams Sumana... lovely prompt...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pearl. Oh I have become anonymous. Sumana
DeleteIf you're listening Jae and Rall, please see if your settings allow outsiders to sign in on your blog. I've gotten on everywhere but yours.
ReplyDeleteJae: I particularly like the acknowledgment in the poem that the two speakers might be art of each other.
DeleteRall: "so you see / we keep on doing this" sums up this amazing poem. Your chosen details make this poem powerful. The parallels are unmistakable. Thanks, too, for the Weisel quote!
DeleteMy settings say anyone including anonymous can make a comment on my blog...thanks for your comment on here....i don't know why I'm anonymous either.....Rall
DeleteI too cannot comment on Jae and Ralls blogs.
ReplyDeleteOr Marys!
DeleteKim, you should be able to comment on mine, as I have comments open for "Anonymous." One does not have to have a Blogger /Google account to comment.
DeleteGreat prompt - certainly got me thinking about those long summer days stuck inside !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alan. Your poem was a delight to read.
DeleteSumana,
ReplyDeleteA very thought-provoking prompt, at least from the perspective I decided to write. I'll always associate age eleven with major changes to my previously peaceful world.
I shall be visiting the poems linked by everyone else...
It's very sad when our familiar world begins to change and shows an unknown face and peace drifts away at such a tender age as eleven. Your poem forces one to think of the time when a child has to resort to make believe to have peace and comfort. Thank you Eileen for this thought provoking poem.
DeleteMust check my settings...whatever that is:) https://rallentanda.blogspot.com/2024/03/classic-prague-awards-2018-klara-8.html...I depressed myself so much with my poem I put this cinquain on as an antidote:)....Rall
ReplyDeleteYeah, harsh truth hits us hard. Enjoyed your feel-good cinquain, cute and incredible. :)
DeleteI love the prompt. I've had so many moths of hard reality. I thought I'd just go with my inner child on this one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susie for joining us and gifting us a lovely poem. Sumana
DeleteYour google sign-in blocked me from commenting on my new favorite of your poems! Wow, Susie! "My mom says my imagination is too big. / I should cut it into smaller pieces" Imagine that! At least the idea of fitting it on the table could be imaginative--but this child knows not to compromise. I love it!
DeleteThank you, Sumana, for your great prompt; and thanks to everyone who responded. So much inteesting reading! Have a great week ahead.
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