22 November 2023

Memory / Remembering


Kadam Flowers

The word memory or remembering takes me to a beautiful song by Tagore where he presents the triumph of poetry / songs over time / mortality. The song reads like this :

 

Monsoon’s first Kadam* bloom        is your boon,

     I am to offer here my Shravan** tunes.

     Dim cloud’s cool shade is their shield,   

       The first golden harvest of my melody field.

     You present today         you may not, in the morrow

  For your bereft boughs will be steeped in sorrow.

  To honor you, the songs of mine

Will keep sailing back each Shravan

Riding the tides of the deluge

Of your stream of oblivion.

 

(*Kadam generally blooms during the monsoon.

**Shravan is the second month of the rainy season.

The song is composed in Bengali. The translation is mine and I feel this English version lacks matching tone, diction and rhythm of the original song.) 

The poet triumphantly says Kadam flowers in his verse will live on in an alternate reality when there’s no bloom left after the monsoon.

So memories can give life to things that no longer exists. 

Adlestrop by Edward Thomas captures an unexpected serene moment of a peaceful era only a short time before the outbreak of the First World War. And the harsh reality is that he was killed in the War even before the poem was published. The poem itself remains as a memory as it were of a poet and an idyllic scene.

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You are asked to write a memory poem today. It can be your own experiences or someone else’s. Memories related to places, people, time, events and to anything you feel connected to are welcome.

 

A Haiku from Matsuo Basho for your inspiration :

 

A weathered skeleton

in windy fields of memory

piercing like a knife

 

Please link one poem that is your response to the material of this prompt. When you link your poem please visit other links in the spirit of the community.


17 comments:

  1. Hello everyone! Hope you enjoy the prompt. Happy writing!

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    1. Ah! This prompt! I always am moved by the poems you pick!
      "And for that minute a blackbird sang . . . ." Wow!

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  2. Good morning, poets! Thanks, Sumana, for this beautiful prompt. I love Tagore and Basho. It is sad that Edward Thomas was killed before his poem was published - and good to know that our poems will remain after we are gone, for those we leave behind.

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    1. Thanks Sherry. Yes Tagore and Basho, my favorites too.

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  3. Thank you for this prompt Sumana - it helped to coalesce, crystalize and vaporize more than a bit of the gloom.

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    1. Thanks Pearl for joining us. I was a bit busy today. Now I'll visit everyone.

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  4. Thanks, Sumana, for the inspiring prompt. I have really enjoyed the poems I have read so far!

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  5. Thanks, Sumana, this was an excellent prompt! My first post from our new city, and I am looking forward to posting more regularly. Love to all, and a peaceful Thanksgiving/Honoring Indigenous Peoples Day

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    1. Thank you so much Amy. How lovely it would be to have you regularly writing for us. Happy Thanksgiving.

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  6. Sumana,
    your prompt subject was very timely. These are the weeks when I reflect back to many happy times , now only memories, especially moving towards the festive days.
    An excellent opportunity for personal recall...

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    1. Thank you Eileen. Yes happy memories are forever. Now I am off to reading your poems. Thanks for joining us.

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  7. Hi everyone! The distressing memory of Covid time still haunts my mind. We all have all have lost many loved ones to this disease...so it wasn't easy to write on it. Hence, a short one this time.

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  8. https://panchalibolchi.blogspot.com/2023/11/thoughts-chafe-at-my-memory.html?m=1
    Am unable to link my poem. Please help. Regards,

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  9. Panchali,
    It's wonderful to find you here, as well as at Facebook.
    I look forward to reading your poem....

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  10. I linked it for you, Panchali. So happy to have you here with us.

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