Kadam Flowers |
The
word memory or remembering takes me to a beautiful song by Tagore where he
presents the triumph of poetry / songs over time / mortality. The song reads
like this :
Monsoon’s first Kadam* bloom
is your boon,
I am to offer here my Shravan** tunes.
Dim cloud’s cool shade is their shield,
The first golden harvest of
my melody field.
You present today
you may not, in the morrow—
For your bereft boughs
will be steeped in sorrow.
To honor you, the songs of mine
Will keep sailing back each Shravan
Riding the tides of the deluge
Of your stream of oblivion.
(*Kadam
generally blooms during the monsoon.
**Shravan
is the second month of the rainy season.
The song is composed in Bengali. The translation is mine and I feel this English version lacks matching tone, diction and rhythm of the original song.)
The poet triumphantly says Kadam flowers in his verse will live on in an alternate reality when there’s no bloom left after the monsoon.
So memories can give life to things that no longer exists.
Adlestrop by Edward
Thomas captures an unexpected serene moment of a peaceful era only a short time
before the outbreak of the First World War. And the harsh reality is that he
was killed in the War even before the poem was published. The poem itself remains
as a memory as it were of a poet and an idyllic scene.
You
are asked to write a memory poem today. It can be your own experiences or
someone else’s. Memories related to places, people, time, events and to anything
you feel connected to are welcome.
A
Haiku from Matsuo Basho for your inspiration :
A
weathered skeleton
in
windy fields of memory
piercing
like a knife
Please link one poem that is your response to the
material of this prompt. When you link your poem please visit other links in
the spirit of the community.
Hello everyone! Hope you enjoy the prompt. Happy writing!
ReplyDeleteAh! This prompt! I always am moved by the poems you pick!
Delete"And for that minute a blackbird sang . . . ." Wow!
Good morning, poets! Thanks, Sumana, for this beautiful prompt. I love Tagore and Basho. It is sad that Edward Thomas was killed before his poem was published - and good to know that our poems will remain after we are gone, for those we leave behind.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry. Yes Tagore and Basho, my favorites too.
DeleteThank you for this prompt Sumana - it helped to coalesce, crystalize and vaporize more than a bit of the gloom.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pearl for joining us. I was a bit busy today. Now I'll visit everyone.
DeleteThanks, Sumana, for the inspiring prompt. I have really enjoyed the poems I have read so far!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary. I'll read the poems now.
DeleteThanks, Sumana, this was an excellent prompt! My first post from our new city, and I am looking forward to posting more regularly. Love to all, and a peaceful Thanksgiving/Honoring Indigenous Peoples Day
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amy. How lovely it would be to have you regularly writing for us. Happy Thanksgiving.
DeleteSumana,
ReplyDeleteyour prompt subject was very timely. These are the weeks when I reflect back to many happy times , now only memories, especially moving towards the festive days.
An excellent opportunity for personal recall...
Thank you Eileen. Yes happy memories are forever. Now I am off to reading your poems. Thanks for joining us.
DeleteHi everyone! The distressing memory of Covid time still haunts my mind. We all have all have lost many loved ones to this disease...so it wasn't easy to write on it. Hence, a short one this time.
ReplyDeletehttps://panchalibolchi.blogspot.com/2023/11/thoughts-chafe-at-my-memory.html?m=1
ReplyDeleteAm unable to link my poem. Please help. Regards,
So lovely to see you today Panchali di.
DeletePanchali,
ReplyDeleteIt's wonderful to find you here, as well as at Facebook.
I look forward to reading your poem....
I linked it for you, Panchali. So happy to have you here with us.
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