04 October 2023

The Hill of Hope


The Hill of Hope

 

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Remember that the 4 non-blonds sang: 

Twenty-five years and my life is still
Trying to get up that great big hill of hope
For a destination . .
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Make a poem for this hill 

(or mountain).  


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Questions, quotes and images to inspire us:

  • What does the hill of hope look like, and how clear is its path?  
  • Does the hill look the same today as it did when you were younger?  How is it different?  How might we each see this hill differently than others do?  
  • Does geographical location play a part in what you see as hope?   
  • Does faith?
  • If you climbed this hill or mountain, what would you see on the other side?
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Dr. MLK said: 

. . . We've got some difficult days ahead. But it doesn't matter with me now. Because I've been to the mountaintop. And I don't mind. Like anybody, I would like to live a long life. Longevity has its place. But I'm not concerned about that now. I just want to do God's will. And He's allowed me to go up to the mountain. And I've looked over. And I've seen the promised land. . . . 

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Sometimes I grow weary of the days, with all their fits and starts.
I want to climb some old gray mountain, slowly, taking
the rest of my lifetime to do it, resting often, sleeping
under the pines or, above them, on the unclothed rocks.
I want to see how many stars are still in the sky
that we have smothered for years now, a century at least.
I want to look back at everything, forgiving it all,
and peaceful, knowing the last thing there is to know.
All that urgency! Not what the earth is about!
How silent the trees, their poetry being of themselves only.
I want to take slow steps, and think appropriate thoughts.
In ten thousand years, maybe, a piece of the mountain will fall.

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15 comments:

  1. Thanks for this lovely prompt, Susan. I love the Mary Oliver poem, the trees being "of themselves only." And that slow climb, forgiving everything. Beautiful.

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  2. Really an evocative prompt, Susan. I, too, like the Mary Oliver poem!

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  3. A beautiful prompt, Susan. I love the line too : 'How silent the trees, their poetry being of themselves only.'

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  4. WELCOME POETS!!! So good to see you and read you and think about that mountain. I'm late, and I still have to type in my name or be anonymous--but look, everything is going smoothly. (I'm so glad that you like the Mary Oliver poem, a new discovery.)

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  5. Thank you Susan. I enjoyed writing a faith poem. Not often a prompt invites one. ....Rall

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    1. "all the clues are about us
      here on this beautiful earth
      all gifts from the Divine" Love this. (Maybe you can copy and paste this on your page?) Such an intriguing poem, starting in the land of hope, and continuing with a list of commandments I could live by--and do! (Except I don't know why to beware pocketless shrouds and camels.) Let us "live in hope." Thank you for this powerful poem.

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  6. Susan - interesting topic - Some days the hills feel like mountains. Let me see what I can compose Truedessa

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  7. "I want to take slow steps, and think appropriate thoughts.
    In ten thousand years, maybe, a piece of the mountain will fall."

    Wise, wise words.

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  8. Hello all! Sorry I am late to the prompt.. it was a busy but exciting week! Going to read and comment now .. ❤️❤️ Thank you for hosting, Susan!

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  9. Hi friends, Pearl asked me to tell you she is away from home so wont be able to comment until she gets back home - but she wanted to say thanks for the wonderful loving comments you left her. She will visit as soon as she can.

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  10. Hi Jae - I also could not comment on your site.. your poem is haunting me since the scratch of the razor and the being together and the uncertainty of being-ness. A beautifully written albeit, for my reading, troubling poem.

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